Friday, January 12, 2007

 

Hanging in there!


Hanging in there!, originally uploaded by Bitterroot.
Taken in Madison, Wisconsin.


transparent wings,
tracings of delicate veins
suspended in blue


# posted by Bitterroot @ 9:34 AM
Comments:
I love the contrasting colors and simplicity of this photo. The haiku is perfect.
# posted by Blogger Pam : 12:30 PM
 
Nice haiku and gorgeous light on those veins! (I wonder if you could leave off the last word?)
# posted by Blogger MB : 1:44 PM
 
mb, good suggestion! I shortened it up by two words, actually. The haiku form is interesting, because I use the 5-7-5 syllable thing as a general guide and usually find it useful as a way to keep things simple. In this case, it was too limiting as there were extra words clogging things up.

Thank you both for your kind words!
# posted by Blogger Bitterroot : 7:02 PM
 
Very much enjoyed my time here...
# posted by Blogger The Lettershaper : 7:16 PM
 
Thanks very much, lettershaper!
# posted by Blogger Bitterroot : 9:32 PM
 
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