Friday, January 12, 2007


Hanging in there!

Hanging in there!, originally uploaded by Bitterroot.
Taken in Madison, Wisconsin.

transparent wings,
tracings of delicate veins
suspended in blue

I love the contrasting colors and simplicity of this photo. The haiku is perfect.
Nice haiku and gorgeous light on those veins! (I wonder if you could leave off the last word?)
mb, good suggestion! I shortened it up by two words, actually. The haiku form is interesting, because I use the 5-7-5 syllable thing as a general guide and usually find it useful as a way to keep things simple. In this case, it was too limiting as there were extra words clogging things up.

Thank you both for your kind words!
Very much enjoyed my time here...
Thanks very much, lettershaper!
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